Listing of the day 5/13/09
NWT NEW skort tshirt CARTERS Turtle girl 3 toddler HCTS
by seller: bellababy75!
Your listing is great. I like the solid black of your gallery photo background, it really catches my attention. Your title is very good, too. If I was doing the listing myself, I might try to work in the words “outfit” and/or “set”. The first thing that grabs my attention after I enter the listing is the cute template, which matches the outfit perfectly!! :):) Love it…so cheery!
I love the quantity and quality of your pictures. So many views, you really leave nothing to the imagination. You did something I try to do when I’m listing an item with a bunch of photos…I repost the gallery picture as the ending photo in my listing. If the pictures tell a story, reposting the gallery is like a closing paragraph. 
I think it’s a great technique!
Your description is well done. You described the set very nicely, and I love that you included the weight information from the tag as well. How helpful for shoppers! You may want to update your description on one matter-it says you have 2 available for twins, but the quantity available is listed as 1. You probably sold the other one and just need to update that.
Shipping, payment and other closing details look great as well.
I want to take a minute to talk to you about your me page. I LOVE LOVE LOVE that you talked a little bit about your family, and how you are selling on ebay to SAH. It makes me *want* to buy something from you. But hey, where’s your HCTS link? Huh? Huh?
xoxo,
Rebecca
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Your pictures are fantastic! I love that the template matches the outfit. Very nice job!
Adorable template and great listing. I do have a question – I thought a “skort” was one that looked like a skirt in front and shorts in the back? I guess I would have listed it as a skirt and put in the description (like you did) that it had attached shorts. I don’t know if many people look for “skorts”??? Maybe they do, I don’t know. But I know that I don’t personally. Otherwise, like i said, great listing. Great pictures as well!
Im ALL about the title!
I would use 3T rather than 3 toddler, which would free up some room for outfit. I would also use shirt rather than tshirt. Words can be so so regional! I think of a t-shirt as more like a Hanes type shirt with a silkscreened logo…. I call what you are selling a “knit top”
BTW, I do think “skort” is now used for any look skirt that has shorts attatched. Without researching it – I suspect it could be a word that is searched for – since lots of moms don’t want the undies to show during “criss cross applesauce” or on the playground. The schools do not want the girls in regular skirts for gym days, etc.
Im not one to go for the graphical do-dads in listing templates – but – I gotta say, the turtle border really does pop that outfit!
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I love your template. Love it!
As for your title, I agree with the above posters. I might have seperated the word tshirt or left off the t. Maybe put top in there as well? I would have put 3T and maybe 3. I probably would have put outfit if it would fit. I like how you have the New and NWT in the title because I believe someone typing in New With Tag will bring up your listing.
The black background really made the outfit stand out in detail. It is helpful to look at other listings and see what color backgrounds bring out the colors the best. Great Job!